Sunday, May 8, 2011

BEAST chapter 13

Hi everyone. I was able to tackle chapter 13. I was hoping to have something to post today but didn't want to make any promises. Enjoy!

BEAST Chapter 13


  1. I am sorry. I love your work but today I came across something that I think is a minor writing mistake."“Alright, babe.” She headed for the bedroom and quickly made the bed. She didn’t want him to think she was a slob, even though it wasn’t exactly her fault that the bed had gone unmade. After all, she hadn’t been unconscious." Shouldn't it be conscious? I am not a native speaker and so it might be that I just don't get it. Normally your stories are so perfect that this was huge for me. I love them all!
    Jana from Germany

  2. Thanks JaNo! I'll correct it before it posts to Literotica. If you catch anymore mistakes just let me know.

  3. Could you do a sequel to The Way Home.

  4. Can Beast/Chris cover "Everyday" by Toby Lightman in one of the chapters? I just hear him singing this song at one of his karaoke nights. :D

  5. Great song. This is the first time I've heard it. If there is another karaoke night, this song is definitely going in :)



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