Monday, June 28, 2010

Sunday, June 27, 2010

Miscengenist Sabishii Chapter 3

The final chapter is finally finished.  This contains the entire third chapter including the preview that had been posted about a month ago, so some of you have already read the first part.  Also, this is pretty long, it felt like writing a novel.  I'll hold off on posting it to Literotica awaiting your feedback.  Enjoy!  Miscegenist Sabishii Chapter 3

Saturday, June 19, 2010

Working on Miscegenist Sabishii III

This is turning out to be a difficult chapter.  Tony, Nikki, Dean, their jobs, a baby.  Story one and two both showed a humor and optimism that I'm finding hard to scrape up for this one.  These characters are going through a rough spot and where is the humor in that?  What I liked about Miscegenist Sabishii is how funny the characters were.  This one is actually not very funny at all.

I hope to be finished soon, but it's going to be a long one.  I'm on page 40 (double space between paragraphs) and it's not even half done...

Some stories flow from my fingertips and onto the page, like my interactive story, or Miscegenist Sabishii 1 and 2.  But not this one, it's been difficult to find their voices.  I guess this is the reason that it's going so slow.  When this one posts I'm going to need some solid feedback on what you think before it goes on Lit.

Thanks, Pep.

Friday, June 11, 2010

Interactive story

I've been wanting to try my hand at an interactive story where there are images and music so here it goes.  Hope you like it.  Very different then what you are used to seeing from me.  I suggest pulling up two versions of the story; one so that you can engage the music without having to move from the story.  Enjoy!

An Interactive Story For You

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