Tuesday, December 14, 2010

Wheels of Steel the Novel

Thank you all for your support of this story.  Thanks to my muse Ho-Z.  I had no idea that this would turn into a novel when I first started.  It has been very hard work to write this; the research alone is mind boggling.  As I sat down to do the re-writes I got to a point where I said, 'WTF???'  Why am I doing this???

Then I remembered the emails from everyone reminding me of how much they love the story and characters.  And I remembered that this story doesn't just belong to me but to everybody who invested the time and energy to read and comment on it.

I haven't gotten to the end, but I have written new material that answers some of the questions you all had.  I expect this to be finished by the end of the year.  If not, I will literally have a melt down.  As I type this the story is 188,000 words long and over 500 pages.  I expect approx 20-40,000 more words. Enjoy!

A white boy with cerebral palsy and his shy black assistant.
Top's popularity and Robin's fears come to light

A secret online friend

Secret revealed and a first kiss

Top and Robin lose their virginity

A party gone horribly wrong, and a dick too big

Amberly confesses her feelings to Top

Jason dies. Caught in the act

Robin’s Mother shows her ugly side

A missed period

Robin's final breakdown

Jason and Robin’s mother come to an understanding


  1. Oh my gosh pep to say that i was shock when i did my ritual of visiting your blog three times a week is a understatment when i seen the revised novel WOS up i was like oh my damn an eary xmas gift from one of the most talented,wonderful writer since i began reading your stories on literotica you are just unbelievable so i would just like to say thank you, thank you thank you for gracing us again with this beautiful written novel can't wait to see what happen with the talk between robin and belinda!!!!!!!!!!

  2. Pepperpace, thanks for posting what you have. Over 500 pages...wow. Thanks

  3. Yes Pep! Thank you! I'm going to get started reading now.

  4. I've very excited to be reading the revisions, I can't wait to see what differences are ahead

  5. I loved the rewrite, it was perfect. I won't post which parts I enjoyed most; I don't want to spoil it for your readers. Great writing Pep!!! Thank you for keeping me entertained. Big Ups for the FREE reads even though I would purchase your novels in a heartbeat. WOS kept me warm in the icy cold Detroit weather.

  6. Thank You Pep. I loved every minute of it. It was perfect. Cant waite to see how things play out. Everytime I read WOS I have the biggest smile on my face.

  7. Oh I totally have music trivia Pep!!! Name this tune...

    Room gets suddenly still
    And when you'd almost bet
    You could hear yourself sweat, he walks in
    Eyes black as coal
    And when he lifts his face
    Ev'ry ear in the place is on him
    Starting soft and slow
    Like a small earthquake
    And when he lets go,
    Half the valley shake

    I'm really liking this rewrite. I think you are handling it perfectly, though I'm only on chapter 7 right now...

  8. Yay@Casey for reading the rewrites. That song doesn't sound familiar. Hey Jason, name that tune! LOL

  9. Neil Diamond
    Brother Loves Traveling Salvation Show

    I know that it was made way way before I was born but I love that song! It helps that I sang that at Disneyland hehe so I have good memories because of it.

  10. oooh early x mass present. i'll be starting to read the reworked version very soon!

  11. Heya Pep! Long time no comment. :) How are you and your family? I've been AWOL buried in research for my dissertation. Am so glad that's over for the year! Imagine my surprise to see that I have an amazing Christmas present waiting for me. =)
    I am so happy to see that Jason and Robin's story is up again. Thank you for thinking of us, your loyal and faithful readers, as you continue to put together this story. We all have faith in you and in the beautiful characters that you have created. :)
    As always, thank you for sharing. Wishing you and your family a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! =) Alex.


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