It took me a week just to re-edit this story. When I first published Angel Over My Shoulder several people commented that while they loved the story--they weren't in love with the rushed ending. In all honesty they were very much correct. I used to have a tendency to end a story when I got tired of writing it, instead of waiting for a truly inspired ending.
If you think you've read this story before on Literotica then you will be surprised at the changes--and hopefully pleased. There are now an additional 3K words and an entirely new ending. Angel Over My Shoulder is currently available on Amazon/Kindle and is pending on Barnes and Noble.
The price is $3.99 and the word count is 44K