Thank you, divisionred. You were one of the people that motivated me to change the dynamics of the story as originally written.
I wrote it as a quickie sexual romp with a fantasy guy on the bus. But as I invested so much time in Tory's character I knew that would be lacking and not true to her person. Also, I felt that I had an opportunity to explore Lee and open up a new world from his viewpoint.
Turns out that these two have become one of my favorite couples in all of my stories.
Great story I really enjoyed the chemistry between Tory and Lee. Also the way you show that people difference can still work to create such a beautiful love.
Hey, just wanted to say that I also love this story. I am also curious as to whether you had planned on adding more to it? It's such a great story that like a lot of others here, I didn't want it to end either. But anyway, I was just wondering.
I loved this story. It was so sensual. Thanks
ReplyDeleteThank you, divisionred. You were one of the people that motivated me to change the dynamics of the story as originally written.
ReplyDeleteI wrote it as a quickie sexual romp with a fantasy guy on the bus. But as I invested so much time in Tory's character I knew that would be lacking and not true to her person. Also, I felt that I had an opportunity to explore Lee and open up a new world from his viewpoint.
Turns out that these two have become one of my favorite couples in all of my stories.
Great story I really enjoyed the chemistry between Tory and Lee. Also the way you show that people difference can still work to create such a beautiful love.
ReplyDeleteHey, just wanted to say that I also love this story. I am also curious as to whether you had planned on adding more to it? It's such a great story that like a lot of others here, I didn't want it to end either. But anyway, I was just wondering.
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